Jigoku Shoujo poem

So I'm gonna start posting my poems and poetry also poems I like or re-wrote so here is my first one...


Oh pitiful shadow wallowing in sin and dying from a wicked fate. A lost soul within the infinite darkness of your own personal hell. Demeaning and bringing harm upon others for your own benefit...would you care to give death a try just this once?

very nice, alot of people might not like these darker poems but its these that truly come from the soul

douchenip wrote:very nice, alot of people might not like these darker poems but its these that truly come from the soul

I write what I feel and how I see things. It is what it is and I am what I am.

thats the way to do it! keep it up

Interesting way to change and even somewhat manipulate the tale of Jigoku Shoujo. Sadlt your poem is not one of kind for many poems have been made in the dedication to that series be it anime or live action or perhaps even the old Japanese folklore.