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    Jigoku Shoujo poem

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    Jigoku Shoujo poem

    Post by J-pop princess on Tue Oct 01, 2013 12:57 pm

    So I'm gonna start posting my poems and poetry also poems I like or re-wrote so here is my first one...


    Oh pitiful shadow wallowing in sin and dying from a wicked fate. A lost soul within the infinite darkness of your own personal hell. Demeaning and bringing harm upon others for your own benefit...would you care to give death a try just this once?


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    Re: Jigoku Shoujo poem

    Post by douchenip on Tue Oct 01, 2013 2:10 pm

    very nice, alot of people might not like these darker poems but its these that truly come from the soul


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    Post by J-pop princess on Wed Oct 02, 2013 1:28 pm

    douchenip wrote:very nice, alot of people might not like these darker poems but its these that truly come from the soul
    I write what I feel and how I see things. It is what it is and I am what I am.


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    Post by douchenip on Wed Oct 02, 2013 5:26 pm

    thats the way to do it! keep it up


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    Re: Jigoku Shoujo poem

    Post by C.C on Wed Oct 02, 2013 6:47 pm

    Interesting way to change and even somewhat manipulate the tale of Jigoku Shoujo. Sadlt your poem is not one of kind for many poems have been made in the dedication to that series be it anime or live action or perhaps even the old Japanese folklore.


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